tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post2167660758695157392..comments2024-01-24T20:02:59.103-08:00Comments on Belldandy100 Decensored Shrine: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-50210688741571874112018-04-17T17:49:06.257-07:002018-04-17T17:49:06.257-07:00Oh my love... Besto milf of all, i love her! Thank...Oh my love... Besto milf of all, i love her! Thank for the work °¬°Neko Konekohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11565397450481199602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-17908115517888834982018-04-13T16:34:58.709-07:002018-04-13T16:34:58.709-07:00@Oliver - Honestly I couldn't tell you weren&#...@Oliver - Honestly I couldn't tell you weren't a native speaker. Your English is very good and you seem to care about this series and took it upon yourself to check for errors. That makes you well qualified in my book.<br /><br />@anonymous - If you could email me or post your email here so I can send you an email I can send you the link to volume 5 to proofread as well.<br /><br />I proofread it multiple times but obviously I miss things >_< I was always more of a science guy than the language type. (Ironic, since I translate doujinshi all the time)Belldandy100https://www.blogger.com/profile/04496213226839670592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-73209546103523118972018-04-13T16:25:30.444-07:002018-04-13T16:25:30.444-07:00That's more or less what I'm thinking. Si...That's more or less what I'm thinking. Since I have to change another typo on the same page I'll just change both. Belldandy100https://www.blogger.com/profile/04496213226839670592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-40705894705471648192018-04-13T12:22:26.891-07:002018-04-13T12:22:26.891-07:00Also I think seriously would be the grammatically ...Also I think seriously would be the grammatically correct choice because it seems to be describing the verb "take", serious is an adjective and seriously is an adverb. But lots of people use adjectives and adverbs interchangeably when speaking so either sounds alright.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-53573122681737502382018-04-13T11:53:07.873-07:002018-04-13T11:53:07.873-07:00If you are looking for someone to proofread for yo...If you are looking for someone to proofread for you I can send you my email, can't promise to catch everything but I don't mind looking over stuff before you post them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-80290722250368760632018-04-13T10:05:52.888-07:002018-04-13T10:05:52.888-07:00I'll let you be the final judge, YOU're th...I'll let you be the final judge, YOU're the English person, not me ^^ (Baguette here.)<br /><br />I can look at the volume 5 if you like, sure, plus there's the thrill of having a peek in advance :) My email is oliver@hentairules.net<br /><br />But if you take proofreading, you would make a better choice to ask a native English speaker, I may very well miss things here and there (no idea ofc, but that's quite likely.)Olivernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-1705105251092609142018-04-13T07:21:28.722-07:002018-04-13T07:21:28.722-07:00Thanks for the catches. The second one it was int...Thanks for the catches. The second one it was intended to be "serious" but seeing how seriously works too, now I'm not sure if "serious" is grammatically incorrect or if either is acceptable.<br /><br />Btw, if you want I can send you Akiko-san to Issho 5 if you want to proofread that for corrections before I post it next Friday though I'm not sure what your email is. If you don't want to post it here you can email me directly at belldandy100@gmail.comBelldandy100https://www.blogger.com/profile/04496213226839670592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3691714947177685824.post-36680862669735801652018-04-13T06:44:39.264-07:002018-04-13T06:44:39.264-07:00Thank you once again Belldandy100 ^_^
If you don&...Thank you once again Belldandy100 ^_^<br /><br />If you don't mind, I spotted these along the way:<br /><br />010.jpg<br /><br />Isn't best to dress up like this... when getting a massage<br />--> isn't IT best, no?<br /><br />Just how serious does she take her massages<br />--> shouldn't it be "seriously"?<br /><br />017.jpg<br /><br />please share some of those burden with me<br />--> burdenS, I think<br />Olivernoreply@blogger.com