Thank you once again Belldandy100 ^_^If you don't mind, I spotted these along the way:010.jpgIsn't best to dress up like this... when getting a massage--> isn't IT best, no?Just how serious does she take her massages--> shouldn't it be "seriously"?017.jpgplease share some of those burden with me--> burdenS, I think
Thanks for the catches. The second one it was intended to be "serious" but seeing how seriously works too, now I'm not sure if "serious" is grammatically incorrect or if either is acceptable.Btw, if you want I can send you Akiko-san to Issho 5 if you want to proofread that for corrections before I post it next Friday though I'm not sure what your email is. If you don't want to post it here you can email me directly at firstname.lastname@example.org
I'll let you be the final judge, YOU're the English person, not me ^^ (Baguette here.)I can look at the volume 5 if you like, sure, plus there's the thrill of having a peek in advance :) My email is email@example.comBut if you take proofreading, you would make a better choice to ask a native English speaker, I may very well miss things here and there (no idea ofc, but that's quite likely.)
If you are looking for someone to proofread for you I can send you my email, can't promise to catch everything but I don't mind looking over stuff before you post them.
@Oliver - Honestly I couldn't tell you weren't a native speaker. Your English is very good and you seem to care about this series and took it upon yourself to check for errors. That makes you well qualified in my book.@anonymous - If you could email me or post your email here so I can send you an email I can send you the link to volume 5 to proofread as well.I proofread it multiple times but obviously I miss things >_< I was always more of a science guy than the language type. (Ironic, since I translate doujinshi all the time)
Also I think seriously would be the grammatically correct choice because it seems to be describing the verb "take", serious is an adjective and seriously is an adverb. But lots of people use adjectives and adverbs interchangeably when speaking so either sounds alright.
That's more or less what I'm thinking. Since I have to change another typo on the same page I'll just change both.
Oh my love... Besto milf of all, i love her! Thank for the work °¬°