[Shiwasu no Okina] Peace Hame! Jou (eng, decen)
[Shiwasu no Okina] Peace Hame! Jou (decen)
Some important things to note about this release. The color pages have been rescanned and are of much higher quality now compared to the original scan out on the web for both the Japanese and English versions.
Furthermore, the English version has had a major overhaul. The previous English version used lower quality scans from the monthly magazines that this first appeared in, but now all of that has been converted to the higher scan quality from the manga version. One chapter that was only in the manga version was not translated so I did that as well. I also corrected many sections of the English translation throughout the manga due to misspells, awkward working and sometimes mistranslated sections.
I don't claim to be the greatest of translator myself, but upon reading parts of the English version it became clear that some parts did not make sense. So I had to manually, look up most of the kanji for the sections in question to check if the original translation was accurate or needed to be re-worded. My goal, which I believe I achieved, is a more, natural sounding dialogue that is erotic and comprehensible. Whenever I do translate I try to avoid strict, literal translation if it sounds weird, unnatural, or simply doesn't make sense especially if it detracts from the essence of what the story is trying to convey. So I hope people don't mind and enjoy the changes I've made.