Monday, March 31, 2014

[Shiwasu no Okina] Peace Hame! Jou decensored

[Shiwasu no Okina] Peace Hame! Jou (eng, decen)

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[Shiwasu no Okina] Peace Hame! Jou (decen)

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Some important things to note about this release.  The color pages have been rescanned and are of much higher quality now compared to the original scan out on the web for both the Japanese and English versions.

Furthermore, the English version has had a major overhaul.  The previous English version used lower quality scans from the monthly magazines that this first appeared in, but now all of that has been converted to the higher scan quality from the manga version.  One chapter that was only in the manga version was not translated so I did that as well.  I also corrected many sections of the English translation throughout the manga due to misspells, awkward working and sometimes mistranslated sections. 

I don't claim to be the greatest of translator myself, but upon reading parts of the English version it became clear that some parts did not make sense.  So I had to manually, look up most of the kanji for the sections in question to check if the original translation was accurate or needed to be re-worded.  My goal, which I believe I achieved, is a more, natural sounding dialogue that is erotic and comprehensible.  Whenever I do translate I try to avoid strict, literal translation if it sounds weird, unnatural, or simply doesn't make sense especially if it detracts from the essence of what the story is trying to convey.  So I hope people don't mind and enjoy the changes I've made.




16 comments:

  1. i love how you are willing to go that extra mile just to make the experience that much more enjoyable for the reader.
    fixing the text ? decensoring ? high res scans ? epic dedication right there man, thanks for all the hard work and time you put in it.

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  2. thank you very much..

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  3. Thanks man. You are doing god's work.

    Would be cool if you tackled Peace Hame Ge for completion's sake.

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    1. I plan on doing so, one day. Most likely not anytime soon though as there are other projects I need to work on.

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  4. Thank you so much, man!

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  5. you are a god among men.

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  6. I beg you: finish this project before going to another one. It is really better to complete a work before going to another. besides, I have no idea what you plan to do, but I do love Okina's works, especially this one.
    [Alexandrine Library]

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    1. Sorry but really want to finish Hizashi no Naka no Real and [Number2 (Takuji)] Minna de Meromero ni Shiteageru. I have been working on Hizashi for months and the number2 doujinshi I've been wanting to do for a while. Besides the work required for a manga is a lot more than a doujinshi. Doing two in a row back to back would give me burnout. I love Okina's work as well but I love many other artists too.

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  7. Thanks for the outstanding work Belldandy100. I'm glad I've held myself back from reading this manga until now.

    BTW I think Alexandrine Library above me meant "before picking up another 200-page manga to work on".

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  8. Hello there. I wish to talk to you privately. Do you have a personal email? Mine is 101732@live.com

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  9. Hey sensei, a long time! I come to say you "Thank you very much" for alllllllll the works that your decensored, your are the bomb, i'm really gratefull for your hard word... Tnkyu tnkyu for ever and ever sensei!

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  10. A big thank for you man! Your work really great!!!

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  11. Whoa, this is pretty awesome! Thanks for your work on this.

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  12. How about the works of Pinvise [Suzutsuki Kurara], any slim chance you work for his releases?

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    1. I like the art style, so yes there is a chance. That being said everything in the future projects list I'd still consider a higher priority so I would not be doing this anytime soon. After I've cleared the current list, I'll try to keep this artist in mind for the next cycle.

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  13. Dude,you have to do some more Rustle stuff. Their censoring is a crime against humanity.

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